painful cries

steph carter

25 Sep, 2011 03:14 PM
painful cries
darkened skies
a sea of tears 
coming from all the years
a hidden face
filled with disgrace

fear for her life 
she heads for a knife
wonders what to do 
she stabs the knife right through

blood runs down
she wishes to be found
she clings to her life
will she win this fight?
will they be to late?

this was always her fate
a painful death
lets have some meth
to celebrate the life
i have to fight
Tags: Pain, Fight
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Madusin says:
01 Feb, 2012 04:40 PM

I think this is a very amazing poem. I'm only 13 but I love to write and read poetry. I'm in love with this one.

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danica says:
04 Jun, 2012 07:12 AM

dont end your life to early.....
no one can hurt you badly...
but only your self..
make your life a little more lively..
soo that you can be happy..
take a deep breath and say to your self..
i can do this...i can make my life better than this...
happy ,sad,angry,love, are emotions
you should use the rest of your life ..
making mistakes are the fun parts..
of our messed up world......
soo be creative ...
this will make you life more colorful...

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Farah Mimi says:
24 Jun, 2013 07:25 AM

I love THE poem. It makes me cry, not OF pain but cry OF joy. An amazing talent is bound to be more interesting poems. Keep it up!

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