Lonliness

Elle.rose7

03 Oct, 2011 07:56 AM
See the girl
Standing in the corner
No words, always quiet
A loner

No one to see
No friends to care
As she stands 
On the edge of despair

Her body screams no
Her heart pleads yes
What will she do?
No one knows yet

Won't someone save her?
It'd be easy if they tried
The little things she needs
Like a shoulder on which to cry

An apology to her parents
And a plea to die
Into divers position
She's made up her mind

No one will see her
No one will care
Even if they did all they would see is
A shell of a girl that is no longer there
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karma says:
27 Mar, 2012 05:23 PM

This is a very good piece

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Caitlin says:
29 Mar, 2012 03:28 PM

This is true... I believe in it, a great piece of poem

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Sad.young.and.wise says:
31 Mar, 2012 03:47 AM

This poem is like made for me i actualy am like that... great work , i love it [^u^]

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Alexis says:
20 Apr, 2012 05:44 PM

that sounds like me ! love it

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no name says:
09 Jan, 2013 05:36 PM

This poem was painful, I loved it

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CrystalWolfTear says:
15 Apr, 2013 05:37 PM

nice poem :))

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Adrienne says:
25 Aug, 2014 12:09 AM

she is just another angel that this cruel world has broken </3

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Stella says:
10 Mar, 2015 12:54 PM

So sad, this made me cry. we all need a friend.

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Umi says:
23 Mar, 2015 06:01 PM

Nyc... i lyk it

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anotherfakesmile says:
26 Oct, 2015 02:52 AM

I really like this . I'm

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ANOTHERVICTIM says:
26 Oct, 2015 02:55 AM

I wish that I cried .... the pain of my depression has seemingly dulled all my thoughts and senses ... minus when I cut .

I love this .


You're very gifted .

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