you left me standing there


06 Oct, 2012 03:14 PM
You left me 
standing there
broken memory ...
life's not fair.

your face
was sweet
we still had ways
but they never meet

break up with me
heading up.. 
leaving me ...
you break my heart

you seem fine 
while I'm upset
you're not mine ...
since last time we met.

so I wish again  
but you just lie ...
so I watch the rain
and see the love die.
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Davin Vazquez says:
18 Apr, 2013 06:02 PM

Nice poem!! :) but put more!! :) i like it but put more!! :)

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sanobar saba says:
22 Nov, 2013 09:47 AM

this poem is the reality with me .I loved my bf very much but he cheated me . Nyc poem to give him a breakup reply .

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pallavi. singh says:
22 Nov, 2013 09:52 AM

nyc poem !! provide more such sad poems to the lovers who have been hurted .

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avichal kumar says:
22 Nov, 2013 09:59 AM

a very very nyce poem

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CrystalWolfTear says:
27 Nov, 2013 04:28 PM

Thanks guys! This has actually been my second poem ever, that I written and it's one of my really bad ones too. A lot has improved since then and I write a lot more poems and of course I do publish them from time to time on here. So feel free to check them out whenever you have spare time.

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Butt Hilal says:
15 Jan, 2015 01:52 PM

what a poem

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