Losing All Strength

CrystalWolfTear

06 Oct, 2012 03:09 PM
So you downed a person
killed their part
drowned the soul 
and killed the heart

my tears will fill the ocean full
until I see your face so still.
I loved you so much but all faded
and the heart is still not mended

after you left on that day
both of us have lost our ways.
once you're here 
the next your gone
I want to see 
who has won

now there's fear
the next hearts torn.
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anne says:
03 Apr, 2013 10:48 AM

This is a gentle yet penetrative read, keep them coming please!

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CrystalWolfTear says:
10 Apr, 2013 06:49 PM

thanks :)

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