me

nathan

02 Sep, 2011 11:12 PM
Here i stand, a broken man 

nowhere to turn to, not even and empty hand,

no one could ever understand,

how ruthless,cold,or vile I've been,

I've fought my whole life,

I've dealt with the cold edge of a dull bladed knife,

but nothing could ever hurt me worst,

than your cold hearted words,

coming from the one i love so dearly,

why didn't you believe me now you see me,

i wanted us to last to grow old and watch the sunset,

but go on join in with the rest,

cheat lie steal threat,

I'm better off left for dead.
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maskedsmile says:
02 Mar, 2012 03:57 AM

i really like your poem!!! that's how i feel right now.

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Anna Bogun says:
30 Apr, 2012 09:40 PM

Nice poem i like it that's how i feel

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lorensha says:
04 May, 2012 08:44 PM

i think its a great poem but in this life time u really need to find a happy place ....im only 18 an i stress but for wat reason....SOME I CANT ANSWER MYSELF...so stay free of pain an live life *oxoxo*peace

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Sarah says:
29 Jul, 2012 12:37 AM

Nice.

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Ed Jerold says:
27 Feb, 2016 05:01 AM

i loved the poem dooooood. You should check out my poem after its approved its called "ITS LIT" i feel that you would enjoy it.

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