Shattered

Lejinska

12 Aug, 2011 11:54 AM
I handed you my heart
when I handed it to you I
told you "be careful its
very fragile".
You held my heart in your hands.
When I turned to go I hear
a shattering sound.
I felt a sharp pain go through me.
That instant I knew you had
dropped my heart.
I turned to see you on your knees
trying to pick up every piece.
I told you "forget it its my heart
I should pick up the pieces".
I bent down and started picking up
the pieces of my shattered heart.
Every piece held a memory that I
will never forget.
I knew you could go on with life
but I cant.
I have to try and put my heart
back together.
But it was useless my heart
was shattered one last time and it 
will never be fixed.
The sharp pain kept devouring me 
I couldn't take it so 
I leave my heart on the ground.
I say to my heart "I'm sorry but
you will never be fixed ever again".
The next day I had said "goodbye" 
to all my friends and I handed them
a piece of my heart 
that I had picked up.
On that night 
I was never to be found.
I had died that night with just
one piece of my heart that held
all my friends in it.
My heart was shattered by you.
you killed me the next night.
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KhiLa says:
01 Dec, 2011 07:23 AM

I love this... I just hope that you weren't being literal. <:)

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KhiLa says:
01 Dec, 2011 07:24 AM

I really do like this poem... I hope you write alot of them.

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skittlelss says:
20 Jan, 2012 09:26 AM

- Stuppid as fuck !!!! who ever wrotee thiss iss duPr

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JsJs says:
23 Jan, 2012 02:29 AM

I really liked this poem and I too hope you write more. . . . .and for Skittlelss you are a heartless person, that cannot comprehend the sadness in this prom that I feel sorry for you.

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N3GR4809 says:
28 Jan, 2012 11:36 PM

To skittlelss, you dont understand the concept to the poem so stfu! And to the writer of this poem .. I can truley relate to what you said

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Ashna says:
05 Feb, 2012 09:58 PM

I shared the text on a page in my FB with a sad photo, its really really good, the feeling described is so so good, everybody there is liking it

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Heartbroken says:
06 Mar, 2012 07:36 PM

i got my heart broken by my best friend,she was and is my life I have no reason to live now I think about her every day I even dream about us finally talking and hugging I lost the most precious thing at a young age I don't think I can ever get over her

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Dynabrown says:
06 Mar, 2012 07:39 PM

@heartbroken I never knew you felt that way about me 5th grade is hard and when you were gone I had to go on 5 months passed I neve seen you so I forgot you sry

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Heartbroken says:
06 Mar, 2012 10:04 PM

i miss my old life I hope my new one will be better in heaven bye life and friends

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serious-k says:
29 Apr, 2012 05:33 PM

I really loved the poem hope you write some more. I have a brokenheart it started 2 years ago and i'm still 13. life is tough but to all the people who have a broken heart try to get over it and if you get a chance use it, because if you dont you might not have another chamnce. thank you again

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alex says:
20 May, 2012 03:24 AM

@heartbroken, i am literally in the same situation as you. i cannot comprehend the pain that is going through me.

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Darlinton Mophethe says:
14 Jul, 2012 04:21 PM

I realy love this poem thats hw i feel nw im so heartbroken.

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Evelyn says:
19 Sep, 2012 11:22 AM

I'm so sad my friend betrayed me by liking the same person as me now my crush is ignoring me and spends most of his time thinking about my friend :(

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Anathi says:
30 Oct, 2012 04:21 PM

what a sad ending, which thing were different bt the way our lifes ends is unquestionable.

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stella obiageli onyeneke says:
25 Sep, 2014 12:40 PM

I have gone through this of late and my heart is yet to be fixed by me cus the one who shattered mine doesn't care. Thank you for sharing this.

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Umi says:
23 Mar, 2015 06:12 PM

Osam... :-)

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