I promised you
Lithium11 Nov, 2011 05:09 PM
I promised you That I won't wake up tomorrow, You will come and find my body laying in a pool of my own blood.... You touch my hand and find it's cold and dead You remember that my hand was warm and welcoming, but now...... It's cold and in need In my hand lies a razor..... And a note saying 'I'm sorry I can't be there to hold hands with you...... I'm sorry we won't have our first kiss.... I'm sorry we won't share our first I love you's ..... I'm sorry I won't be there when your on one knee ..... I'm sorry I won't say yes.... I'm sorry I won't be led by my father down the isle.... I'm sorry that we wont have our first kiss as husband and wife.... I'm sorry I won't be there when I am having our children.... I'm sorry I won't be there to watch them grow..... I'm sorry I won't be there to watch them have there own family.... I'm sorry I won't grow old with you..... I'm sorry that i won't see my grand children grow up...... I'm sorry we won't die in each others arms..... I'm sorry for leaving you like this.... But I'm not sorry for loving you....' As you read the note you had tears coming down your face..... You wished I would wipe them away... You regret..... But I do too I watch you as you have a family and grow old..... Sometimes you think of me and cry... Other times you smile.... You kept the note I left you... As a reminder.... To never let go of the ones you love..... And if you love some one...... Tell them......
Tags: Suicide, Depression, Regrets, Blood, Unloved
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15 Jul, 2012 06:43 PM
Wow, this one got to me. Excellent written!
18 Jul, 2012 09:57 PM
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10 Aug, 2012 08:58 PM
The laSt PaRt was TouChInG me...*
29 Jan, 2013 02:16 AM
Lost my wife last weekend. Very touching. It feels like she wrote this for me. Thanks.
04 Apr, 2013 02:24 PM
i know how yu feel this is a really good poem and i wanna hear more! I just found out that after 2 years of being with my ex-boyfriend he was cheating on me.. i didnt know wat to do so i started reading peoms and now i am feeling better and i dont blame my self you inspire me!
01 Sep, 2014 11:53 PM
Waw very nice poem i loved it
12 Nov, 2014 03:29 PM
i am going to lose my boyfriend today because i am going to brak up with him. he hurt my feelings and im very mad.
05 Oct, 2016 05:55 PM