Bitter emo girl


06 Sep, 2010 12:40 PM
A bitter goth girl,
with a shriveled black heart.
Is this how you see me?
Do you think you know me?
Do you pretend you care?

You don't know me,
no one ever has.
I keep my true self hidden,
and I don't let that girl out.
She screws things up,
with all of her emotions and cares.
And so I ignore all of their stares.

The girl I am and used to be,
cries much less than me.
She smiles a lot more
and dances in the sun.
But this isn't how you see me.
You see the shell
that I created to lock up that girl.

The girl that I was
wore lip gloss and skirts.
She laughed so hard she'd cry.
But because of people like you I'm not that girl.

I keep my true self hidden,
and I don't let that girl out.
Tags: Emo, Girl, Hide, Pain, Suffering
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Courtney x says:
08 Sep, 2010 04:58 AM

Your incrediably talented at writting!!

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Emily says:
12 Sep, 2010 12:25 PM

Thank u :)

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Loret says:
22 Nov, 2011 01:40 AM

It happened again
Again I fell for you
And again I got hurt

I?m Laing on the floor
With blood streaming tears
Those of a broken heart

I gave you my all
And again it didn?t worked for us
One of us is always lost

I didn?t care when you did
And you didn?t care when I did
But I love you

I thought you were stronger
But the only way you were strong
Was when you broke my heart

You tore it apart?again
You stepped on the pieces?again
Until it cut your feet?again

Then you ran away again
Leaving me there
Drowning in my bloody tears

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Zori says:
27 Sep, 2012 03:29 PM

I loved this poem and felt it hit home, Ive been hidding the real me as well for as long as i can remember cause caring and being EMO is wrong, but its not and I feel inspired by this that i shld just unlock the key and let that girl OUT <3 ^_^

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Mimosa says:
11 Dec, 2012 06:42 AM

It feels like this poem hits me. Im not really hiding my self the whole time, its just when im with the people whom who dnt know me but when im with friend Im being true to my self. It touches my heart coz Im like what you wrote. the poem is good and so nice.

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