Forever incomplete


10 Jul, 2011 11:12 PM
When we swore to never be apart
I never knew that it was just me
You are still in my heart and soul
You have my whole heart
I'll forever be just a half waiting to be whole
My love in vain
You don't even understand this pain
Without you it's like
The day without sun
Rain without clouds
A kid without parents
A pool without water
A rainbow without color
Thunder without lightning
A laugh without a smile
Family with no love
Night without the moon or stars
You are still whole and happy
I'm forced to still love and miss you
There is still no words to describe it
Without you I'll always be incomplete
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Rona says:
31 Jul, 2011 06:05 PM

Thank you so much for writin this. It describes my life and what just happened to me recently. I hate when its just you doing the loving. I hate when the other person is happy and goes on with their life but you're stuck in this black pit of despair and loneliness.

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Alex says:
04 Aug, 2011 09:08 PM

Very good writing. I know exactly how you feel

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twinkie says:
15 Jul, 2013 07:24 AM

I feel this pain. I loved her and after 6 years she never even said good bye. She did say hello to her freedom though. Now I go through my days with a broken heart and the memory of the girl she swore she was. Thinking about what we could've been, and wishing she was still by my side. I still love her, and I still miss her. Thank you for sharing your poem with the rest of us who have also lost half of our hearts to the ones we loved so much...

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