The Open Window.

Parry Boparai

30 May, 2011 01:26 AM
The window of our memories is still open,
My mind is still thinking about you and hoping,
Those days can still be recalled but not you,
Give me a chance to prove that my love is true,
You left me a long time before,
My boat is still in ocean finding its shore,
The long nights are sleepless,
I am having your and just yours stress,
Now I stood, where we met first time,
I am here but yours no sign,
The question which makes me weak is "was my love weak?",
My condition now is a fish without stream,
My world of dreams is shattering,
A good reward for my love from you I am getting,
Do me a favor stay happy wherever are you like birds on trees,
If you still miss me than please come and close the open window of our memories!
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jaskaran singh aulakh says:
30 May, 2011 11:30 PM

ayeeeee hayeeeeee..oeeeeeeeee............makhna.........kamal hi karti......................H

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Parry Boparai says:
05 Jun, 2011 08:59 AM

Thanks brother//////////////////////

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Kayla Raye says:
23 Jun, 2011 06:58 AM

This is really good. When I read this it rought back memories of me and my ex. He always knew how to make me smile. But I just wanted to tell you this is amazing and I love it! This poem has definaty been hearted(:<3

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Parry Boparai says:
23 Jun, 2011 11:15 PM

@Kayla Raye
Thanks a lot Kayla Raye ........ I will be posting poems here,,,,,,,,,,once again thanks alot....

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Tear Drops says:
07 May, 2012 03:37 PM

This poem is really amazing
it brings back memories of someone I loss
I love ur poem its good.

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Parry Boparai says:
11 May, 2012 01:11 PM

Thanks a lot Tear Drops.

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skipperz says:
20 Sep, 2012 04:43 PM

aww this is cute <3

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