Make It Go Away

Kira

09 Feb, 2016 05:12 PM
I had to block out the thought of you,
So I don't lose my head,
You never get in touch with me,
Even though I'm the one who wanted space.

Hate me today,
Hate me tomorrow,
Hate me so you can finally see what's good for you.

I've been sober for three months now,
That's one accomplishment you helped me with.

You have always doubted such things as suicidal hate.
I'll drive so far away,
That I'll never cross your mind.

I fell down yelling,
"Make it go AWAY!"
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Suffice Coxswain says:
16 May, 2016 01:30 PM

i'm taken and carried away by your poem, kira

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Jason ramirez says:
27 Jun, 2016 09:19 AM

You stole this from the song hate me by Blue October

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Kira says:
29 Jun, 2016 11:27 AM

Jason I have never heard of Blue October so how can I steal something from someone I never heard of. If their are similarities then who cares, I wrote this in my journal when I was 17 years old and I didn't find out about this site and others like it until a few months ago. If you don't like what I posted when don't read what I post ever again!

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Liar says:
26 Jul, 2016 03:33 AM

This is a well known song. Taking bits and pieces of a song and rearranging words does not make it your own! Just because you want to let people believe you came up with it doesn't mean you did. Why steal someone else's work? Someone who has been thru so much. I hope this gets removed.

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Kira says:
27 Jul, 2016 09:22 AM

I have never heard of this band before so how the HELL was I know that it was parts of a song! Just because they are a well known band doesn't mean anything. I just wrote how I felt so it does mean that I came up with the poem. I'm not going to change it just because you don't like it. They already approved this poem so if you don't like it you can go fuck yourself!

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jay says:
07 Mar, 2017 06:38 PM

wow ok yeah totally not that song

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