The Darkest Side - Darkpalm21

The Darkpalm21

23 Jul, 2014 01:37 AM
Over my deepest flesh 
There is something I hide behind my smile 
Ever since my sufferings started...

At First its too hard to pretend 
that everything's alright and I taught that
if I can't manage to keep these thing inside
everything will be remain miserable...

My faith,hope,love or even everything I own 
will eventually void by these thing and
turn everything in to guilt and hatred 
that I never ever wanted to feel...

Because I already done with that side...
But its keeps pursuing behind...
I've to resist these darkest side 
Before its turn my way again to its glide...

The Side that I hated most....
Is always inside trying a countless attempts 
to bring me in the bottomless hole....

Just like a cave that's has no escape...
Or an illness that's has no cure...


It's always there waiting to your weakest days....
When everyone turning back on you...
When everyone judge you...
And when everyone blame you...

The Calling of that Dark side you always tried to blur...
That's Whispering "Revenged"...
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darkpalm12 says:
15 Sep, 2014 02:37 AM

i think this is lovely, but your grammar could be A LOT better, in the most constructive way ever, i would like to tell you that your tense also changes.
thankyou xxxxxx

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solage says:
29 Oct, 2014 06:13 PM

It great need a grammer improvent but still great!

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