He Loves Her More

Dawn

15 Aug, 2011 02:59 AM
A broken heart
will cease to beat
Until it finds its way

So wish and pray
Your life away
And dream he's here to stay

But know that he
Has places to be
And in reality

He loves her more
Your heart is sore
And just remember or

The things you say
May wash away
The friends you may have made

So hold my hand
To help me stand
So just remember and

Yes this is me
My sad story
And know I won't be free

So here I go
I'm all alone
And he will never know

I see your face
Feel your embrace
These things I can't erase...
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victoria says:
02 Dec, 2011 08:01 AM

that sounds so familiar. i wish it didnt but it did. i hope your happy now honey or at least content. i hope that was so long ago for you that when you read that poem, you cant believe that you thought you would never be free. xoxo

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Dawn says:
03 Dec, 2011 07:48 PM

Thank you, that is a very sweet thing to say. This poem was written in August this year. Still love him, but my sorrows are fading. Slowly. It has been 12 months since the break up.

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victoria says:
08 Dec, 2011 03:39 PM

i know how it feels. it feels awful. soon i hope to see you post a happy poem. unless it will piss all of the lovers of sadness off! lol jk. keep your head up

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Desirea says:
21 Dec, 2011 08:12 AM

this poem tells everything i once felt. there is this guy who still has my heart and he plays with it just lik it is a toy, i still love him so much even thought i know that he is happier with his new love, but for some reason he just wont let me go

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Belem says:
19 Mar, 2012 12:36 AM

I never gone through it but my friends have and i could see how it feels becuz i see it in my friends eyes and i bet it really hurt!!!!!

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Mandy says:
18 Jun, 2012 09:57 PM

I wanted to say - This is exactly how i feel/felt. I can't shake the hurt - the pain. How could i let someone have so much of me, i knew he was with someone else! I was so stupid! Now its over, i am happy to know i am not alone, but saddened that others know this heartache!

Thank you for your beautiful words of Loves demented ways!

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Maxine says:
20 Nov, 2012 11:29 AM

This poem shows the lingering effect of love's sadistic ways. I wish I could tell you that it will get better, but that's not for me to say. Words are, after all, useless unless you know that they are true. So keep fighting, keep living, keep moving.

My heart goes out to you, love.

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Ellen briganti says:
09 Feb, 2015 04:31 AM

For Michael

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yasmine says:
10 Feb, 2015 08:19 PM

This is how i feel whenever me and my boyfriend break up. We have been best friends since kindergarten and we have dated every year but we always end up breaking up. It was a pain to see him with another girl. I always think he loves her more than me

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