saying goodbye


05 Nov, 2010 07:04 AM
saying goodbye hurts
when i had to say goodbye to my mum
my heart stopped thumping
i started feeling cold inside
it was freezing fog filling me up
i feel desperate
try not to cry donna i said
but it was too late I'd started
i had tears like streams running carelessly down my hot red cheeks
it feels she doesn't love me anymore
it feels there is no one to talk to
but i know there is
you know that silly feeling you get when your upset 
well that's what i got
i hate to say goodbye
i can't wait to say hello again
i love you mum
Tags: Mom, Family, Love
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dipak chapagain says:
25 Feb, 2011 12:25 AM

I like yr poem & it really hurts me when i read it.

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