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Don't Forget Me

Alex

09 Aug, 2011 04:21 PM

As the car made contact with my fragile body, all our memories passed by my eyes. I didn?t think about the pain. I thought about the things I would miss: My High School graduation, getting married, having children. And then, I thought about you. Your smile, your soft hair, the sound of your laugh. All of that would be gone, out of my reach, but the memories will never fade. I will never forget you. You will eventually move on, but all I ask from you, is remember me. Remember our good times, and remember our bad times. Remember our fights, and remember our apologies.

My body lands in a heap on the side walk. Blood forms a pool around me. I hear screams from all directions. The car swerves and hits a tree. The driver, injured and clearly intoxicated, stumbles out of the car to my side. ?I?m so sor-? He slurs before I lose consciousness.

After what feels like century , I come to my senses. Brief images are played like a movie. People are yelling as ambulances arrive on scene. I formed a lump in the back of my throat, when I saw that you weren?t there. The pain of the accident sank in, and I quietly cried out in pain. My Mother rested my head on her lap as she silently wept.

A car tore down the road and stopped by one of the ambulances. Out you stepped of car and my slowing heart skipped a beat. Before you could get to my body, a paramedic stopped you and said something I could not hear. You ran past him to my side and knelt down. Tears streamed down your face.
?I love you,? You choked. I could feel myself being lifted up onto the stretcher.
You took hold of my hand, and kissed me on my bloody lips. I looked you straight in the eyes and said, ?I love you too?, but it only came out as a whisper. Doctors all around me rushed, but it was as if they were in slow motion.
I realized that my final seconds were passing. I gripped your hand and said,

?Don?t forget me?, as my heart beat it?s last time.

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Tabitha says:
09 Oct, 2011 08:00 PM

So Sad..i Could Cry even From the starting

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marny says:
10 Oct, 2011 02:15 PM

heartbreaking story ... your last moments are you moments of pleasure i hope your smiling at you lover and she smiles back at you :) x

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Vivienne says:
20 Oct, 2011 09:06 PM

Can't. Stop. Crying. You should be a romantic tragedy novelist.

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AnonGirlie says:
17 Nov, 2011 12:43 PM

i like this.

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Nicky says:
21 Nov, 2011 12:33 PM

this is sad :(

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person says:
20 May, 2012 01:35 AM

how did the person tell this story if she were dead?

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mystery says:
20 May, 2012 01:37 AM

sad story........ whoever wrote this should be a writer

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sally says:
24 Aug, 2012 01:58 AM

O.M.G this story just made me cry...i love it and ill always remeber this story...its a good think that the girl came back...

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victoria says:
27 Oct, 2012 11:25 PM

yeah its really sad especially the beginning

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deborah says:
02 Apr, 2013 05:39 PM

its a really sad story, 4 a second i thought it was real and was tearing up. You really gripped the feelings of the victim, it was great, you r very talented

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galdino says:
20 Apr, 2013 01:17 AM

the saddest story ever herd from anywere

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Purple says:
28 Aug, 2015 05:50 PM

This is such sad story... I almost shed some tears... :,(

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