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suicide story

Clary Barns

28 May, 2015 05:10 AM

There was this girl named Julie Green, she had dark raven black hair, blue eyes the coler of the sky, and was tall compared to most girls at her school. Her best friend was Stacy Jekkens, she was meidium sized compared to Julie and had blonde hair, and green eyes. Julie stood up for Stacy when she was being bullied and from then on they became really good friends who swore to always have each others back.

When they where younger Julie walked in on Stacy trying to commit suicide by overdosing on pills, but Julie stopped her just in time. From then on Julies been scared to walk in on her only to find her accomplished and dead.

The wind outside was blowing hard and Julie and Stacy were walking back from school. " I saw you crying today." stated Julie. "yeah Jessie called me a filthy whore with no life... she told me to rot in hell" said Stacy with a tear slowly rolling down her cheek. " that bully, she needs to be taught a lesson." said Julie with and angry tone. They made it to their sreet and said their goodbyes. "Bye Stacy" Said Julie while waving at her. "bye, see you tomarrow" yelled Stacy from a disstance. Good, thought Julie, she said I'll see tomarrow.

That night Julie had a horrible nightmere of her walking in on Stacy to see her lying dead on the floor with a knife in her chest and blood everywhere. Julie woke up in tears screaming. "whats wrong?"asked her mother as she burst in her room. " nothing just another nightmare." stated Julie while whipping her face of tears.

The next day Stacy came to pick her up to go to school. When she did, Julie noticed she looks like she had been crying and she was wearing her only long sleeve shirt she owned. Julie sighed and asked her what was wrong but Stacy didn't reply instead she stared straight ahead, and kept her distance.

School let out and Julie couldn't find stacy waiting for her in their normal spot. Julie stopped and turned to see Jessie punching her. Julie ran over to her and punched Jessie sending her to the ground. "back off my friend Jessie! havent you done enough?" yelled Julie while helping Stacy up. "fuck off loser" said jessie while whipping her nose clean of blood leaving a smear across her cheak. Stacy grabbed Julies hand and started walking away. They got to her street and They said goodbye... Exept Stacy didn't say see you tomarrow. She always does. Julie ran and grabbed her wrist and burst into tears."promise me you wont"cried Julie. "what-"asked Stacy but was cut off " no promise" yelled Julie so loud her voice cracked. "I have to go Julie" said Stacy and she disappeared into her home.

That night Julie kept waking up crying yelling for her mom, screaming in her sleep to where neighbours came over to see if everything was alright.

The next morning Julie ran to Stacys house to see here greatest fear come true. Stacy was sprawled out across the floor and a knife in her hand with blood streaming from her throut. Julie screamed so loud the whole neighborhood heard and rushed to see what lay in front of them. Julie saw a note but didn't dare read it for if she did it was guaranteed she would burst into tears again, instead she walked out and went home and sat in her window watching the paramedics take her best friend away.

2 monthes past and Julie finally went back to school. Near the end of the day Jessie walked up to her and laughed. "Wow you had guts showing your face" stated Jessie with a big smile across her face. "exuse me" asked Julie with a questioning look on her face. "don't act like you don't know,everyone knows that Stacy's death was all your fault" said Jessie. At that Julie lost it, she punched Jessie sending her to the floor with a broken nose crying. " you Bitch, your the one who bullied her so much to the point where she cut.and your the one who laughed at her all the damn time and you, not me, but you beat her up. You should have the guts to even show up anywhere no one likes you. " Julie screamed and ran home. She couldn't take it anymore, the pain, the guilt. She notaced no one was home so she got the knife and drove it home right in her heart. Her mom, 2 hours later, showed up marched up to Julies room to see her lying there stiff. She ran to her daughter to see the knike in her heart. Her mom cryed and at last, 10 miniutes later, the rest of the family returned to see the body that was snow in her moms arms. Her dad shed a tear and finally called the police and barley got the words out that his daughter commited suicide. From then on nothing was the same, everything went down hill from there, the sky was always gloomy to her loved ones and her whole family slowly lost control.

3 years past and her mom still cries every night but divorced her dad and got married to a coworker named Dillion, her sister Started to cut and hang out with the wrong crowd, and her dad got very ill.

2 more years past,and her mom is being abused by her husband, Her sister is 20 now and is dating some guy who just got out of prison, Her dad died of cancer and her mom got pregnant and put the baby up for adoption.

1 year past and her sister was murdered by her boyfriend at 21, her mom died because her husband drove of a bridge drunk and Jessie committed suicide because she knew her death was her fault.

The world went up side down and all because one person bullied a kid and it moved on to the ones she loved most. Suicide doesn't solve things, but love does and thats all they needed... LOVE <3

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Jessie McMillen says:
09 Jul, 2015 03:08 AM

Wow =( thats sad

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Diosany says:
12 Jul, 2015 05:58 PM

Wow that was sad and hurtful.:-D

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Brayden says:
10 Aug, 2015 05:24 AM

This is really sad, is this true:'(

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iyaloo says:
11 Aug, 2015 02:08 PM

wag.... this is so sad but can clearly indicate that is well set up, by an intelligent ,smart and a creative person well done ...

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Vicks says:
19 Aug, 2015 09:34 AM

That's so sad... ;-(

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Akorfa says:
01 Sep, 2015 11:56 AM

That was really sad.

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Unyc says:
25 Sep, 2015 09:53 PM

Waaah...the story is so touchn en sad 2 knw that the whole family incredible circumstances.MAY GOD REST THEIR SOULS IN PEACE

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maahir says:
01 Oct, 2015 08:32 PM

Whoa :'(
Really moving .
Is it true tough?

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Clary Barns says:
30 Oct, 2015 06:23 PM

No the story is not real I just want people to see what bad things could happen if they took thier will tear everyone down knowing they lost a loved one

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Bonnie says:
03 Nov, 2015 06:09 PM

This is a sad story???? I hope this doesn't trigger anyone

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CrystalRose says:
09 Jan, 2016 12:09 AM

God, that made me cry. Holy cow. I hope they rest in peace and God accepted them in his home

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shana says:
07 Mar, 2016 01:45 PM sad....btw just a a little info...when u mess wit one part of a persons life ur messing wit the entire family

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Clary Barns says:
07 Mar, 2016 11:06 PM

this story is made for my own personal coping process.... not to trigger anyone either..I hope people can read this and think "oh my life matters, maybe I shouldn't think like this" but I know it doesn't always work that way, I myself have felt this way and want nothing but for others to see that it doesn't help and that people do care.

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Randa says:
13 Apr, 2016 02:11 PM

I'm from algeria i did not understand what do u mean with she bullied a kid??

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Randa says:
13 Apr, 2016 02:13 PM

Please answer me i need more explanations about the story.. And why the girl wanted to suicide

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Clary Barns says:
09 May, 2016 08:23 PM

She commited suicide because yes she was bullied, something inside her she couldn't help control and it took over and pushed her over the edge. Both characters couldn't handle the pain. she wanted to because it was too much for her. It is sad and tragic no it isn't true, just something that came from my head. Thank you for commenting and ask aaway wwith your questions i will do my best to respin. Love ya'll stay safe please. ^3^

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Gabriella R says:
20 May, 2016 05:02 PM

..this is a really good story...i crying reading it cx erminds me of myself a little bit...

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Brandon says:
26 Jun, 2016 10:00 AM

I have felt like that for years being bullied at school it's not right and suicide is not the only answer just stand up to them BTW is the story true if so then I honestly did cry ????

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Clary Barns says:
19 Sep, 2016 04:51 PM

story isn't true

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Mimikitty says:
13 May, 2017 03:22 PM

This is my life
my friend over doced got better suiside dead my fult dared her to drug tryed to suiside 3times got coght 2 times failed 1 time

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Mimikitty says:
13 May, 2017 03:30 PM

Good bye world
to Nate my boyfried/fiencee
it's not your fult you are the best person in the world there is the movie we snuk from my moms drower under the matteres on my bed plus the black ops game that You got me for my birthday in grade 7 I hope that you find them and that you won't forget me
I will miss yur hugs and kisses and the felling of your hands on my waist
good bye and I love you

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