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Forbidden Love


30 Jan, 2010 05:20 PM

I would tell him i love you over the phone when my parents weren't home. I would always hear the reply "I love you more". Just hearing his voice say that made me smile, no matter how many times I have heard it. If only we were allowed to be together. I hate how my parents were. They were racist and unreasonable, stuck in their ways. My mom would tell me that i don't know what love is at such a young age but she was wrong. I was in love with him. Whenever i saw him, i would smile. I couldn't help it. My heart would pound even after all those months we have been together, sneaking and lying to our parents just so we could be together. Yea, it sounds bad but it was the only way we could see each other. We texted each other from morning to night and when no one was home, we would call each other. One Saturday morning, i texted him. i never got a reply. He was always up early in the morning. It was strange that he didn't text me. So when I got home that night from work and my parents went out to eat like they do every Saturday night, I called his house. His mom picked up the phone and her voice sounded sore and filled with short breathes like she had been crying and maybe still was. I asked if Michael was there and when I said his name, the phone filled with the sound of a sob. After a minute or so, she calmed herself down and said calmly to me, "Honey, I'm sorry... I know how much you loved him but Michael got hit by a car this morning and he's dead." I just held the phone to my ear, Not wanting to believe what I heard. I finally said,"dead?" She was silent for a moment and then said yes. I started crying. I couldn't stop. I loved him. I heard on the other line of the phone, "I'm so sorry. This is hard for all of us. If it makes it any better, He loved you... more then anything." I couldn't take it. I just said bye and hung up. I just cried myself to sleep that night and when I woke up, I got ready and went to church. After the serman, they were having a tiny funeral for Michael. It was amazing how fast they got it all together. I looked down into his coffin, seeing the boy that I loved more then my own life. I reached down and touched his cheek. It felt cold and lifeless. Tears were flowing from my eyes, Mascara was staining my cheeks. I whispered, "I love you." and blew him a kiss. I walked towards the door and pushed it open and I started running. I ran past the field and into the park that we got caught kissing in once. In the middle of the field, I fell to my knees and I cried into my hands. At that moment, I felt arms wrap around me but when I turned around, no one was there. Then I heard a very low whisper in my ear, "I love you more."

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Dani's BF says:
30 Jan, 2010 06:55 PM

Dang, dats deep baby, i hope it never happens to us.
love michael

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araceli says:
01 Feb, 2010 11:24 AM

awwwwww that is so sad mann i hope that doesnt happen to me

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Dani says:
03 Feb, 2010 07:37 PM

yea... i had a dream dat dis happened and it was just horrible

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deanna says:
15 Feb, 2010 04:38 PM

Oh my goshh this story is so sad.I even started tearing up when i read it. ):

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Haley says:
18 Feb, 2010 12:31 PM

i am so by michael i know how you feel he was like your best freind it is hard when i read this is made me cry.

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caryl says:
21 Aug, 2010 06:49 PM


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hiddename24 says:
28 Aug, 2010 05:04 AM

i really like this story, it reminds me how important time are., if there is opportunity just grab ita,,,

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lorelei says:
06 Sep, 2010 10:12 PM

,this story is really sad but it was very teaches us lesson that we must spend our time with the person we love while they are alive..Let's show them how much we love them...

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DinaSh says:
02 Jul, 2011 02:12 AM

This Is So Sad :(

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Shuka says:
10 May, 2012 01:36 AM

This was so short but so sad for me I cried. The other long stories are too long and boring I could never get to the good part. This one is sad. Just sad and touching. The ending was amazing.

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Alexa says:
30 Sep, 2012 11:42 PM

It made me cry a little

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Victoria says:
15 Oct, 2012 06:22 AM

Thats how me and my bf were but he didn't die and we broke up

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deborah says:
02 Apr, 2013 05:34 PM

you kno wat? ? ? ? ? I strted tearing up a bit the way u lovd each other ws really great. I kinda kno how you feel but my bf didn die.... Im sure he's looking out for you and he'l always be with you in your heart. Keep going strong......and its ok to cry....even after you say ur ok

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Grace95 says:
17 Apr, 2013 05:49 PM

Really sad

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julie gomes says:
22 Apr, 2014 04:49 PM

it ws hrt touchng......which made me cry......

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Manahil Aftab says:
28 Jun, 2014 03:35 PM

Really sad

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Mark says:
24 Sep, 2014 02:41 PM

Good Job

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Shanu says:
10 May, 2015 09:00 PM

i would call it Reality because stories are always fiction . ReAding your reality just made be cry :(

Rest in piece Michael

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Jillian L says:
15 Oct, 2015 05:14 PM

That just left me hanging like what happened and where the voice was coming from which I know it was her boyfriend. But was that really him or his spirit? I'm so lost

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leslie says:
21 Mar, 2017 11:52 PM

omg that way so sad

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rojit naorem says:
07 Apr, 2017 07:45 AM

So sad

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