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Thanks For The Memories


21 Oct, 2011 02:04 PM

It was 8:oo pm as my father came in and said we were going out for a surprise. This was rare, after my mother passed away after she gave birth to me, my dad was always finding it hard to juggling with his work and looking after me, this is hard as i am dyslexic. My dad needs to get extra help for me as I'm starting high school I am 11.

My father took my hand and escorted me to the car. This would be the last time i set foot in this car. It was getting dark and the rain was pelting on the car i sat back and looked out the window to figure out where we were going. I was in the passenger's seat and my dad was driving. It was so cold outside that the car windows started to freeze.

We were coming out of the tunnel when my dad threw his hand at the horn "BEEP-" There was silence as our bodies got forced forward and the airbags hit our face. The windscreen was completely shattered and the car smaller and bashed as it was before. Then i heard cars drifting to avoid the van and our car then came screams and the van drivers voice shouted "Call the ambulance... as I loss concise.

I woke up seeing light above me and doctors all around me holding an mask to my mouth while rushing me into the intensive care unit. Everything around me was blurry and i was thinking more about my dad than the pain that was shooting around be fragile body. I lost concise again as my body was giving up on me everything went blank.....

I woke up four months later to see my dad at the side of my hospital bed clenching my hand and saying how much he loved me and the surprise was what my mum wanted to show you when you were going to high school it was a locket saying "never give up from mum and dad" , as i started to see objects ,shadows, colors etc. i could see that my dad was with a nurse sitting in a wheel chair with a neck supporter on and a stocky on his left arm and the locket in the other he was in a very critical condition but still putting up a fight to see me. I lifted my hand to take off the mask I was wearing but I was unable as I was so weak and shocked to see my father and me hocked up in all sorts of different wires. I looked around again at my dad and said i love you too as he started to drifted off the nurse was shouting numbers and letters at the other doctors and nurses. They put my dad on a stretcher and rushed him back to his room, all i could think about was him. I was crying while nurses where trying to calm me down. I was fighting to get out of my bed and walk. I pulled myself up and got out of bed , my foot touched the ground but not for long as i fell down with it. The doctor lifted myself up into bed and said the words i was dreading to hear " i didn't want to be the one that told you but your so unwell you can't walk, you can barely move". i was confused and said "but i got myself out of bed " then the doctor replied if you didn't see your dad you would have not, it is your adrenaline kicking in" i stopped and lay there while the doctor was feeding me through a tube i thought to myself is this a nightmare?

The next day the nurse came in and held my hand she said to me, "i am so sorry to tell you this but your dad has past away ,but there is a family wanting to adopt you they are lovely and they have a wee girl your age that also has dyslexia so you will be going to the same classes". i stopped and looked away as tears ran down my face, down my eye. i was distort that my dad past away but i was so pleased to hear that someone wanted me with my learning disorder, that i would finally have a mum and a sister that understood me.

The week after the bad news my new parents and their doctor visited me that was my first visit since my dad came in. The family looked beautiful the mother of this family had long blond hair and blue eyes she was skinny, The father had short light brown hair with green eyes and was also skinny and the little girl had blond hair and green eyes. The mother looked at me and said "Hello i know what you have been through but we are willing to bring you into the family then we can have another beautiful little girl. The little girl looked at me and said "we will have fun together because you have the same learning disorder as me and we both have blond hair and skinny and small" the father said "we will help you every step of the way and you will love your new room". i smiled and finally saw hope.

Three months later everyone was shocked to see me walking running and talking again. the nurse said it was finally time to go with your new family. The nurse gave me a present from my new mum dad and sister, i opened it with excitement and pulled out a nice new pink dress with white tights and new pink shoes. There was a card it stayed "we are so glad you made it through this nightmare and pulled through so we bought you this and there is still more to come because we are coming to get you today! i was so excited, i ran in my hospital room and put on my new outfit while the nurse was pleating my hair. Few hours later the family came through gave me a hug and held my hand they put me in there car with the little girl next to me and off we went to the new house.

As we arrived i took one look at the house and my mouth dropped it was massive. My new mum was holding two suitcases with all me new clothes and my new father was holding all my new teddy bears. Then the little girl took my hand and ran with me to my new bedroom i was so happy to see all of my new furniture. It looked like a princess's room. The mother and father kissed me and the little girl hugged me they said that i have been through so much that i should now live like a princess. My new dad gave me my locket.

Sometimes I wonder,
Why could my dad not have lived ?
is he with my mum now ?
is it okay to cry ?

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Kenzie says:
15 Apr, 2012 01:42 AM

I cried ur story is sad :(

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Seavling says:
19 Apr, 2012 06:44 AM

I read your story and it interested me ,teach me what is life ,for your mum and dad I think they 'll staying at the heaven smiling at you because they see you have a new parent and new happiness life , I don't think u should cry any more ,this is life ,everything is the god 's prepare ,just happy with what you have .

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lina says:
26 Apr, 2012 02:26 PM

It's such a heart touching story. this is true rite?

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Angela says:
26 Apr, 2012 10:29 PM

This is so sad, I feel sorry! but...the good thing is that your parents are together! and you have a new family! isn't that cool! anyways, Sooner you will see your dad and mom :)

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Swaggy says:
27 Apr, 2012 05:42 AM

This is really sad i started crying. im so happy for too have a lovely family to spend the rest of ur life with. But your real parents are probably in heaven watchin over u, proud of you and happy you have people to look after you and share happiness with you...

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sara says:
29 Apr, 2012 05:59 PM

you are lucky you now have a mum and a dad
i hope you have a lovely life and never give up on anything your parents are probably looking at you and smiling because you have the most impotant thing ever...... a family :]

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lito asnchez says:
01 May, 2012 09:39 PM

I bath tears for this story, i feel the same way when my mother Dely passed away with congestive heart failure 8 months ago. I counldn't think i can live a life without my mother around, Now i believe she's in heaven and very happy now - God took him so she could no longer feel the pain, with Gods plan. I really missed my mother so much, everytime i missed her i just look up the sky where shes there. Don't cry - no reason to be sad, your mum and dad are very happy looking at you right now with a new family that will live up with the best in all.

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hilda says:
09 May, 2012 11:54 PM

that was sutch a good story

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genesis colon says:
15 May, 2012 07:21 PM

this is such a good and sad story and i wish the very best for you and i bless your new parents. i think that your life is now better and i hope that it gets better in life god bless you :) i know it will get better.

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ruchika says:
17 May, 2012 12:03 PM

You know what...what ever God does is for something you have such a nice should thank God for it.....not anybody or everybody gets such life even aftr so many miserable things happening around....

God Bless you happpyy.....

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Annie says:
18 May, 2012 11:30 AM

You are a real fighter girl. :) I cried a lot reading your story. But at the same time I got encouraged to live happily despite the odds. I salute you.

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ishfy khan says:
19 May, 2012 03:35 AM

:( soul touching !!!!

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mystery says:
20 May, 2012 01:21 AM

that is so sad..... it reminds u to apretiate what u have, i dont know what i would do without a mom and dad....... i hope she found love and happiness in her new family

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Karla... says:
04 Jun, 2012 11:33 PM

this is the saddest thing ive read ....i started to cry ..

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dream says:
24 Jun, 2012 12:22 AM

really loved this cryed so much

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wtf says:
18 Jul, 2012 10:07 AM

sounds like ya livin da life bro , except with the other shit ya know , man some people (da father) need to learn how to drive i mean common D:<

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Sarah says:
21 Jul, 2012 07:15 PM

Every happening is God's work and has a logical reason,however we cant realized! Thank God for happy end for that sad story! Hope to see ur happiness! :)

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outlet says:
17 Sep, 2012 08:10 AM

WONDERFUL Post.thanks for share..more wait .. ?

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fazrolfathil says:
29 Oct, 2012 02:40 AM

beautiful story

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XRumerTest says:
07 Nov, 2012 06:34 PM

Hello. And Bye.

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XRumerTest says:
09 Nov, 2012 11:58 AM

Hello. And Bye.

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XRumerTest says:
09 Nov, 2012 07:36 PM

Hello. And Bye.

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S... says:
17 Nov, 2012 10:31 PM

Crying is fine. . . Cry yourself out.

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hii says:
14 Apr, 2013 10:50 PM

Is this a real story about yourself? Just really curious to know this made me cry

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Xena says:
18 Apr, 2013 05:34 AM

What a happy ending.. And your very tough to go through the pain..
God has plans for everyone.. Keep that in mind.
And it is okay to cry.. Everybody has a softer side...
God bless you,

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Nelda Kansas says:
03 Jul, 2014 04:28 PM

Its great to become at this point.!!! close friends as this web site is fruitful for people who would like to know far more about it

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rhuti says:
17 Sep, 2014 12:52 PM

ur stories is so touching,just be happy and dnt cry,everything happens for a reason,it shows that God loves you,enjoy ur new family,and for your paents they are so happy to see you enjoying life again

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rhuti says:
17 Sep, 2014 01:06 PM

ur stories is so touching,just be happy and dnt cry,everything happens for a reason,it shows that God loves you,enjoy ur new family,and for your paents they are so happy to see you enjoying life again

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Jasmine Jones says:
02 May, 2015 10:22 PM

I know how you feel i lost my dad in january 2013 saddest day of m6 life but i still have m6 mum +sister and rest of my family i really feel for u and am saddened by this story

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The broken girl says:
30 Jun, 2015 06:08 PM

Congratulations. Your really strong to be able to go through all of that. Its okay to cry. Losing someone is really hard but I'm also happy that you have found a good loving family. I hope you live a good life.

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ainun jariiah says:
25 Sep, 2015 10:05 AM

So sad.... ????but.. pls be a strong girl...????

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Lily says:
25 Dec, 2015 02:29 AM

Thats so sad :'(

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Jill pong says:
15 Feb, 2016 05:31 PM

stay strong ;)

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Sandy says:
15 Jun, 2017 12:22 AM

this is so sad just be a strong girl

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