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The Broken Girl


15 Aug, 2011 04:58 PM

Once upon a time, there was a girl. She was the worlds biggest hopeless romantic, and always dreamed of finding her soul mate. She had severe, horrible abandonment issues, because her father had abandoned her. Her father was leaving one day and looked her straight in the eye and told her that she was unlovable.That no one would ever, ever love her. She had fallen in love before, but there was one special boy. She risked EVERYTHING for him. She wasn't aloud to date him. Her stepfather beat her when he found out she loved him, because she was 14 and he was 17. But she still loved him enough to keep in contact, even though she feared what her step dad would do. He swore multiple times that he wouldn't leave, that he understood her constant fear of abandonment. He told her he loved her, he promised he wouldn't leave, that he would be there always. But one day, she called and she discovered he had changed his number. She cut, and cut, and cut. She loved him. She believed him. And he completely abandoned her. She was devastated, depressed, angry. She was broken, he began to heal her, and then broke her again.
She believed she was unlovable.
She was truly broken.
She was alone.
She realized that love is the sweetest, most painful form of suicide.

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Nonono says:
11 Nov, 2011 11:29 PM

Dont feel that way if a human dienst love you there is someone that does and that is god what other kind if love can we ask for other than his.You will find the right person just be positive and dont fall for someone that you know will husrt you at the end...

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moomoopants says:
16 Nov, 2011 01:06 PM

wow your cool

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randy says:
17 Nov, 2011 12:26 AM

God loves you more neva mind

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dezzy says:
02 Dec, 2011 07:25 PM

this is what happend to me im 14 and im in love with a 17 year old

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wellwisher says:
21 Dec, 2011 09:27 AM

god has given us this life..sometimes we cant get wht we want,but there is always more better than tht..god knows our happiness n good-bad better than us..sometimes we feel we are alone n we are notlovable..but its nt truth..find your happiness with others smile..give small happiness to others..i m sure u will enjoy ur life..never lose ur hope..there will b more lovable person for urself n others..n forgive all for whtever they do with u..i will feel good..n plz reply to my comment..

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sophie says:
04 Mar, 2012 08:09 PM

If you love someone tell them how you feel but some boys do leave you sorry to hear but it will get better

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agnes says:
03 May, 2012 09:03 AM

hay i know how you feel my names agnes and im 18 and when i was 16 i fell in love with a guy and now im married to him but it was all great at first aye, and i agree with love is a form of suidice and he was 32 when i met him, he told me all these things, saying im his one and only and it hurt me when i found out he was texting other girls my age, and getting them to texts him it hurt me cause, the things he said to them. Like your cute, sexy, hot and that i wanna get to know you more, and i think about you all the time and it hurt me so much i tried killing myself for love, i jumpd out of the car 3 time while it was moving, i tried cut my slef to feel pain, over dosed my self with pills you and drive my dads car over a clif i was so sad and lonely, i get that why now and then but i realIze if god didnt love he wouldnt of sent his son to die for us and so when i feel down i cry and let it all out to god cause he will never leaves iloveyou in the name of god keep strong and i know how you feel

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