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I Loved You..

Cianna Holloway

22 Dec, 2012 06:38 PM

Boy: What?!?
Girl: Yes.
Boy: YES!
Girl Starts To Fall For The Boy
Exactly One Month Later
Girl's friend: I Think It`s Time You Two Broke Up.!
Girl: Okay..{Secretly Doesn't Want To But Is Too Afraid Her Friend Will Hate Her If She Says No.}
Boy: Hey.
Girl: Hi.
Boy: How's it going?
Girl: It's fine.
Boy: What's wrong?
Girl: I think we should break up..
Boy: What..?
Girl: We should break up.
Boy: Why..?
Girl: It`s Just... We Never See Each Other Anymore
Boy: I can change that.
Girl: I've never met your family..
Boy: I can change that.
Girl: I just don't feel that way for you anymore..
Boy: I wish I could change that.
Girl: I'm sorry.
Boy: I know.
Girl: I Have To Go..
Boy: Thanks for trying..
{Next day:}
Boy: Hey.
Girl: I'm sorry..
Boy: No I'm happy we broke up I could tell we weren't going anywhere too.
Girl: Okay...
{Freshman year:}
Girl: (Playing their song) I like him.I have since we first started dating,but I can't tell him;I can't tell anybody.
{Sophomore year:}
Boy: (Has A New Girlfriend)
Girl: (Playing their song) I like him...I still do...but I can't tell him,I can't tell anybody.
{Junior year:}
Boy: (Him And His Girlfriend Break Up)
Girl: I Like You. I Always Have && Always Will!
Boy: I'm Sorry, I Like Someone Else.
Girl: (Runs Away Crying.)
{The next day:}
Boy: (Finds a note in his locker)
Note: I Told You I Like You, But I Was Wrong. I Meant I Love You; But You Don`t Love Me. I Wish I Could Change That. I`m Sorry For That Day Back In 8th Grade. I Really Didn't Want To. I`m Gone Now, I've Been Sick For A While Now.. But The Time You Read This I think I`ll Be In The Hospital On Life Support. I Just Needed To Tell You Before I`m one. I Love You? Don`t Forget That!!(:
Boy: (Stares At The Paper For A Long Time And Runs Down The Hall, He Went To Her House, But She Wasn't Home.)
{The next day:}
Boy: (Goes To The Hospital And Tells The Nurse Who He Wants To See)
Nurse: It seems she checked out yesterday.
Boy: She's better?
Nurse: I'm afraid not. She had cancer and
she passed away yesterday. I'm sorry.
Boy: (stares at the floor, he runs out the door and down the street)
{The Next Day, At Her Funeral!)
Boy: (Asks to speak)
Boy: A Few Days Ago I Received A Note From Her. (He Reads The Note) And I Wanted To Tell Her Before She Left That I Loved Her, I Love Her. I Loved Her For A Long Time; And There Is Nothing I Can Do Now.! Nothing
All I Can Say Is I Love You, And Now Your Gone.... I Wish I Could Change That.!
Boy: (Starts Crying And So Does Everyone Else.)
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The Boy Ends Up Marrying Her Friend Who Told Her To Break Up With Him In The First Place. When He Found Out What She Had Done, He Killed Himself; To Be With The Girl He Really Loves!? He Was 28 Years Old..

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Nessy. says:
29 Dec, 2012 06:56 AM

Ohmigosh, her friend is such a selfish person ! And amazing, he dies to be with his true love. <3

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Njeri Grace says:
29 Dec, 2012 05:11 PM

Feel xorry! U might be a victim.

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sehrish says:
30 Dec, 2012 11:01 AM

OMG. Her friend is such a selfish person !!

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Dolly says:
06 Jan, 2013 09:39 AM

HER FRIEND PROBABLY WANTED HIM ALL ALONG

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Milan mgr says:
20 Jan, 2013 12:01 AM

I like that

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clydether says:
04 Feb, 2013 10:05 AM

...it's nice, I really like it :)

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angel says:
02 Mar, 2013 05:24 PM

Her friend is so freaking selfish!!! Thats Sad but i liked it. The friend just wanted him to her self.

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blaablaa says:
18 Jul, 2013 04:48 AM

the friend is a stupid bitch

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Annonymous says:
19 Jul, 2014 09:25 AM

This story is sick. It is not nice, or sad, or heartbreaking. It is sick and pathetic. That idiot of a boy abandoned his wife because he got a little sad. He is not a man. He is a boy. A small, insignificant, pathetic boy who deserved to die, who deserves to burn in the flames of Hell.

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