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I Loved You..

Cianna Holloway

22 Dec, 2012 06:38 PM

Boy: What?!?
Girl: Yes.
Boy: YES!
Girl Starts To Fall For The Boy
Exactly One Month Later
Girl's friend: I Think It`s Time You Two Broke Up.!
Girl: Okay..{Secretly Doesn't Want To But Is Too Afraid Her Friend Will Hate Her If She Says No.}
Boy: Hey.
Girl: Hi.
Boy: How's it going?
Girl: It's fine.
Boy: What's wrong?
Girl: I think we should break up..
Boy: What..?
Girl: We should break up.
Boy: Why..?
Girl: It`s Just... We Never See Each Other Anymore
Boy: I can change that.
Girl: I've never met your family..
Boy: I can change that.
Girl: I just don't feel that way for you anymore..
Boy: I wish I could change that.
Girl: I'm sorry.
Boy: I know.
Girl: I Have To Go..
Boy: Thanks for trying..
{Next day:}
Boy: Hey.
Girl: I'm sorry..
Boy: No I'm happy we broke up I could tell we weren't going anywhere too.
Girl: Okay...
{Freshman year:}
Girl: (Playing their song) I like him.I have since we first started dating,but I can't tell him;I can't tell anybody.
{Sophomore year:}
Boy: (Has A New Girlfriend)
Girl: (Playing their song) I like him...I still do...but I can't tell him,I can't tell anybody.
{Junior year:}
Boy: (Him And His Girlfriend Break Up)
Girl: I Like You. I Always Have && Always Will!
Boy: I'm Sorry, I Like Someone Else.
Girl: (Runs Away Crying.)
{The next day:}
Boy: (Finds a note in his locker)
Note: I Told You I Like You, But I Was Wrong. I Meant I Love You; But You Don`t Love Me. I Wish I Could Change That. I`m Sorry For That Day Back In 8th Grade. I Really Didn't Want To. I`m Gone Now, I've Been Sick For A While Now.. But The Time You Read This I think I`ll Be In The Hospital On Life Support. I Just Needed To Tell You Before I`m one. I Love You? Don`t Forget That!!(:
Boy: (Stares At The Paper For A Long Time And Runs Down The Hall, He Went To Her House, But She Wasn't Home.)
{The next day:}
Boy: (Goes To The Hospital And Tells The Nurse Who He Wants To See)
Nurse: It seems she checked out yesterday.
Boy: She's better?
Nurse: I'm afraid not. She had cancer and
she passed away yesterday. I'm sorry.
Boy: (stares at the floor, he runs out the door and down the street)
{The Next Day, At Her Funeral!)
Boy: (Asks to speak)
Boy: A Few Days Ago I Received A Note From Her. (He Reads The Note) And I Wanted To Tell Her Before She Left That I Loved Her, I Love Her. I Loved Her For A Long Time; And There Is Nothing I Can Do Now.! Nothing
All I Can Say Is I Love You, And Now Your Gone.... I Wish I Could Change That.!
Boy: (Starts Crying And So Does Everyone Else.)
The Boy Ends Up Marrying Her Friend Who Told Her To Break Up With Him In The First Place. When He Found Out What She Had Done, He Killed Himself; To Be With The Girl He Really Loves!? He Was 28 Years Old..

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Nessy. says:
29 Dec, 2012 06:56 AM

Ohmigosh, her friend is such a selfish person ! And amazing, he dies to be with his true love. <3

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Njeri Grace says:
29 Dec, 2012 05:11 PM

Feel xorry! U might be a victim.

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sehrish says:
30 Dec, 2012 11:01 AM

OMG. Her friend is such a selfish person !!

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Dolly says:
06 Jan, 2013 09:39 AM


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Milan mgr says:
20 Jan, 2013 12:01 AM

I like that

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clydether says:
04 Feb, 2013 10:05 AM's nice, I really like it :)

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angel says:
02 Mar, 2013 05:24 PM

Her friend is so freaking selfish!!! Thats Sad but i liked it. The friend just wanted him to her self.

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blaablaa says:
18 Jul, 2013 04:48 AM

the friend is a stupid bitch

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Annonymous says:
19 Jul, 2014 09:25 AM

This story is sick. It is not nice, or sad, or heartbreaking. It is sick and pathetic. That idiot of a boy abandoned his wife because he got a little sad. He is not a man. He is a boy. A small, insignificant, pathetic boy who deserved to die, who deserves to burn in the flames of Hell.

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