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Broken butterflies


22 Apr, 2017 12:01 PM

To everyone who has fell in love or say the one you thought was going to end up with you.. someone once said "Dont love someone you know is going to let you go", but how could you know? All those times all you thought was happiness and real love. This story goes a long way well for me a girl like me who been through this heartbreak as much as you all have.

I didnt wear bright colors, skirts,dresses always the dark colors that i chose no skirts no dresses just plain jeans and a plain shirt, well he was someone who saved me from all the hell i was going through,i mean we all do but he was the one i was a sophomore in highschool and he was a senior the beginning of the year i didn't really know anyone except my cousins,but he came up to me and started mezsing with me at lunch trying to make me laugh and smile all the time which i didnt like to do veru much but somehow one day he called me beautiful and said "your smile lights up my whole world" i laughed but i didnt know why cause it was so cheesy? Or was it that it made my heart skip a beat? Well i blushed and he evn said "is that why your name is rose because you have rosy cheeks?" I laughed again blushing even harder this time ,he took my Mp3 which was the only thing that made me feel alive, i got mad but i took his phone and i looked at him straight in the eyes.

Wow those eyes sparkled as they were the stars brighter than the sun and the dark brown eyes matched his dark brown hair which shined when he smiled, i sat there still holding his phone looking into those eyes saying "give me my mp3 or your not getting your phone back" he laughed and mocked me "well to bad next time we see each other i guess we will have to switch right?" And then the bell ringed for 5th hour and as in highschool students are rushing to get to class as i walk looking down at his phone and seeing those eyes again made me smile as i thought he went his own way he was actually behind me and i wasnt paying attention then. He tripped me and caught me right into his chest i was so shocked and i landed rigjt in his chest i got up so fast and started apologizing even though it wasn't my fault he laughed and said "i guess your falling for me too" i was upset but i said in a whidper "falling for you?why would I i barely know you". But wow was i wrong.....

To the people who is reafing this i will continue with part 2 so many memories are coming back so i will have to finish it by today! Thank you fr reading so far!:) remember "love is something that can never be taken away or lost"

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nafae says:
14 Jun, 2017 07:55 AM

part 1 was exciting ,just upload part 2 faster so we can read It :)

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Rose says:
27 Jun, 2017 11:13 PM

@nafae omg thank you for reading! your comment actually gave me the courage to keep writing this story!

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Da18 says:
03 Jul, 2017 11:09 AM

When are you gonna upload the second one the first one was so good

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Dan says:
06 Jul, 2017 07:27 AM

When is part 2 gonna come out

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evelin says:
09 Jul, 2017 05:17 PM

aww this is so sweet

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Hope says:
13 Jul, 2017 07:52 PM

Can't wait for part 2.

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NaNa says:
14 Dec, 2017 01:28 PM

aww i really love your stories , u should have uploade part2 already cause i wanted to heard more

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