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I will wait

Kharles

09 Aug, 2010 02:56 AM

My name is Irene I have a male best friend his name is Charles he's a stubborn person,he always gets into a fight with our other schoolmates and everytime he gets into a fight I will always ignore him and he keeps asking "now,what have i done?" and I never get tired of telling him that "don't fight with others again".
I'm In love with him since 1st year of high school but I don't have guts to tell him personally it's very insulting for my ego so I decided to write a letter,good thing he called me that night
RING RING RING
Me:hello charles?
charles:hey Irene wanna have dinner tonight?
me:sure,where?
charles:okay meet me at the place we used to go,7 pm sharp!
me: place we used to go?ohh a bit puzzling let me guess.
charles:okay bye.
me:ohh wait!
(charles hanged up the phone}
After that call I was thinking about the place we used to go and something came up in my mind "ohh yeah right at the park" so I quickly prepare myself it's already 5:30.(after 1 hour)
I was in the taxi when my phone rang
me:hey!
charles:where are you?
me:almost there 10 minutes more
charles:okay I'll be right here.bye
me:okay bye

My letter was with me
Dear charles,
I know this is a stupid thing to do but I was desperate
to tell my feelings for you,I love you.
My feelings started since we became close. I'm always
dreaming about you and me,I tried to stop my feelings but it's much too strong to fight I will always love you hope that nothing would change.
Truly yours,
Irene
I was about to step out from the taxi when I saw a crowded people in the park so I was worried I runned fast to the crowded people then I saw the love of my life,charles
he was lying in the green grass with blood he was stabbed 2 times,of course I was shocked I cannot move
and he smiled and said "what have I done?" I was crying and I knelt down to him and say "hey charles what happened?" at the same time I was begging for help and he said "one of the persons I fought with, got back to me" "then why didn't you fight back?" I said. "because you said that you don't like me to fight" he answered. I was crying and he put something on my pocket I said to him that I love him very much,he pointed his finger to the starry heaven and said "I will wait for you there" after that the love of my life died.

I was crying while I was reading the letter he put in my pocket
Dear Irene,
I love you very much I can't tell you so I decided
to write a letter for you.
Even though I was stubborn I learned to love you more than my life I will risk everything just for you I Love you and always will.
Your Bestfriend,
Charles.


(AFTER 50 YEARS)
Since charles died I never involve myself to any guy.
"Ms.Irene it's getting dark" my caregiver said. we were at the cemetery in charles' tomb I lay down on his white Tomb and said "I'm here already" then I died with my letter and his letter at my hand.
THE END
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Aevii says:
19 Aug, 2010 09:33 AM

GOSH ! i love this so much .. TRUE LOVE WAITS :)

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jeffrey walker says:
24 Aug, 2010 05:31 PM

this is very sad but i like it. there really is true love out there.

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marian says:
26 Aug, 2010 03:10 AM

great true love story. It brought me to tears.

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srivarma says:
26 Sep, 2010 11:18 AM

Irene,

i literally cried
So painful it is

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abdo says:
26 Oct, 2010 06:32 AM

wowo very sad story.. how you kepet his letters all this years...

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