John L.'s Profile

Name: John L.
Joining Date: 13 Mar, 2017 08:10 PM
About Me: I am 18, in high school, and love writing stories. I come from a messed up past but look forward to the future. I hope you enjoy the stories I share and come back for more.
Total Submission: 6
Total Comments: 8


Total 8 Comments
That was really good.. I hope it wasn't true or that would be really sad. Anyways I think it gets boring a few paragraphs before the end but it is really good and I about cried when I reached the end. I hope to see more from you. :)
I seriously hope this isn't a real story. It was so sad and the end is heartbreaking. I didn't expect that and to be dying and then your daughter wakes up. I couldn't bear going through that. This has brought me to tears. God bless you.
Good story. Very sad indeed. I thought the ending was gonna be different when it said he got out but it was still very good.
Erica, I'm sorry to hear that. It can be painful and really hard to understand sometimes but we just have to keep our head up and be strong and we can get through this. Angiee, Thank you. It still hurts but not as bad anymore. I think if you are going to be old enough to have a relationship you have to be mature enough as well. I try to treat my girlfriend like a queen and spoil her and make sure I treat her right. It's the way it should be. I'm glad my story touched you.
That was an amazing story. I felt the pain of being abandoned after the years of love. So sad... I feel so bad now.