The Open Window

Parry Boparai

05 Jun, 2011 09:03 AM
The window of our memories is still open,
My mind is still thinking about you and hoping,
Those days can still be recalled but not you,
Give me a chance to prove that my love is true,
You left me a long time before,
My boat is still in ocean finding its shore,
The long nights are sleepless,
I am having your and just yours stress,
Now I stood, where we met first time,
I am here but yours no sign,
The question which makes me weak is "was my love weak?",
My condition now is a fish without stream,
My world of dreams is shattering,
A good reward for my love from you I am getting,
Do me a favor stay happy wherever are you like birds on trees,
If you still miss me than please come and close the open window of our memories!
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Tags: Love, Heartbroken
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Rayaz says:
30 Jun, 2011 06:52 AM

hey. i love the poem. its amazing. it kinda realates to me in different ways. but this is good. i loved it.

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Parry Boparai says:
03 Jul, 2011 08:24 AM

@Rayaz :-
Hi. Thanks a lot .... i'll be posting poems,,,,,,,,,,, once again thanks for liking friend......
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karan says:
08 Oct, 2012 02:21 PM

nyc poem and rhyming themes keep it up!! bro success is no far away its nearer to u but u have to recognize oppurtunity

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