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Sad, sad, sad


27 Aug, 2011 01:13 AM

One day there was a girl named Danica she had a boyfriend who is Jake, Danica and Jake are already 28,they were dating since they were 20 with their parents permission,their parents said they were a perfect pair, Danica and Jake was already planning to be married because they know that they're at the right age and know that they can already supply their needs because they already have their own jobs, Danica is a high-school teacher while Jake is working in an office.When they're parents knew about their plans the both side agreed and even helped them about it, Danica and Jake was very happy and can't wait for their wedding.The next month they were really busy for their wedding because there are only five days and they are to be married,they already sent invitations to their guests and prepared their clothes for their wedding,a few hours Jake noticed Danica was very stressed and planned to give her a rest and take her to their favorite dating place when they were still dating (its Jake's small house near the sea) then Jake told Danica about his plan, Danica was very happy and hugged Jake so tight.Then the night passed,when the morning came Jake was awake at 6;00 in the morning and was preparing their things to bring after that she went back to their room to wake Danica because its already 8:00,she gave her a kiss and said " My lovely bride wake up,we need to go and enjoy the this morning" Danica woke up smiling and gave Jake a kiss.After an hour they were ready to go,when they were on their way outside Danica's mother noticed them and said smiling "Where are you two going" "Where going to my house mom,uhhhmm you know our favorite place" Jake explained, "ohhh okay then enjoy and be careful,but what are you taking the car or just the motorcycle?" Danica's mother asked, Danica replied " Mother we're taking the motorcycle" Jake looked Danica " Please Jake let's the motor" Danica said to Jake sweetly then Jake agreed.When they were on the road Danica was enjoying and was talking to Jake while their riding together,after a minute Danica noticed that they were running so fast "Jake,honey please slow down,im already frightened" Jake replied "its okay,its even fun" No its not!please slow down Jake" Danica said nervously "okay but hug me first" Jake requested then Danica gave her a big hug and said "okay now please slow down " "No kiss me first" Jake said,Danica kissed him on his cheek "Now i gave you a big hug,i kissed you already now please slow down" Danica said "Danica,sweet please get my helmet and wear it because its bugging me" Jake said,so Danica followed Jake and took the helmet and she wear it. The next day their parent just saw on the news that there was a motor accident,and they realized that it was Jake and Danica,but still Danica was saved because she was wearing the helmet.Jake knew that they were already out of control because the motorcycle's machine broke down so he just wanted to feel Danica;s hug and kiss and want to save her that's why he gave his helmet.

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aimee says:
28 Nov, 2011 09:16 PM

oh my... so sad but its sweet also...

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gabe says:
30 Nov, 2011 02:52 AM

that was terrible...

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saami says:
01 Dec, 2011 12:36 PM

Omg... i wish i'll olso get sum1 lyk jake,who will love me like hell....god please send me sum1 like jake.. and god bless Danica..

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avijit banerjee says:
03 Dec, 2011 03:38 AM

its really a sad story.i pray to god that u will get back ur danica in next lyf.

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Mariane Paulines says:
04 Dec, 2011 11:50 PM

how I wish I meet that kind of guy.....i love you jake

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carlyn says:
08 Dec, 2011 04:42 AM

aaawwww... that's so sad... sacrificing yourself to save the one you love... "bitter sweet"

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Rakesh Ranjan Panda says:
09 Dec, 2011 02:35 AM

This is terrible end of a love story that i ever read.i feel proud for you jack.

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priyanka says:
09 Dec, 2011 04:15 AM

nice story i love this

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earth says:
14 Dec, 2011 10:24 AM name is Danica as well ...thats why I like it even more- I will always survive :D

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Avigail says:
18 Dec, 2011 01:07 AM

Such a sad story!!! I wish there was someone is the world that loved me as JAKE!!!!
Oh god!!!!I wish it was a better ending

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abdul hafiz says:
30 Mar, 2012 04:34 AM

Sacrificing s real true luv...

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sewe says:
09 Jul, 2012 10:54 AM

wow if am de one,i will die too.but remeber when their is life their is speechless

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aaadiii says:
03 Sep, 2012 08:04 AM

i wish god wil also give me lv lyk tht....

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Sarah says:
03 Sep, 2012 08:51 PM

So sweet &sad &touching &GREAT ..........

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crazy love grl says:
01 Apr, 2013 05:26 PM

Its a very touching n sad story. Will ter be any1 as sacrificing as jake? Its reeeeeeeaaaaallly ggggrrrrrrreeeeettttt

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