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My Love R.I.P.

Chasity

29 Aug, 2010 10:43 PM

I'm shy, but strong, sweet and sophisticated, but I didn't date much. A girl at my school I liked a LOT. I didn't have the courage to ask her. 'Why can't I do it?' I ask myself. She hated her life, she hated herself, she wanted to die. I felt bad for her, boys used her. I wanted to take her away from her life and show her my love for her, my TRUE love. But one day. I walked by her house. There was a sign on the door. It said:

R.I.P. Chasity Raven

I panicked and fumbled with the doorknob. I opened it and searched the house. Then I heard the door slam when I was in the other room. I ran outside and saw her standing in the middle of the road with a gun to her head... "Chasity! Don't do this!" I yelled for her. She looked at me crying, her face paled. "All I wanted," She choked. "Was true love." She cried harder. "I'm here." I murmured running to her and taking her into my arms. "I love you, I always will... I don't want you to leave me, I want you here in my arms." I murmured. She made a sly smile and kissed my lips softly. "I love you too." We slept together that night in the driveway. But she couldn't breathe. She had an ASTHMA attack. I asked what's wrong, she tried to get my inhaler from her pocket, once she got it out. She noticed that it was empty. She hugged me close. Asking me not to leave her. "I wont leave you." I cried. Tears running down my face.

Her last words were:
"I love you, goodnight..."

She shut her eyes and they never opened again, I sat there crying with her lifeless body in my arms, I stroked her silky brown hair. I wiped away the tears on her white skin. I covered her up with the blanket. I took the gun at her side and pointed it at my chest, right at my heart. I whispered a prayer to God. Then, with tears ringing out of my eyes... Before I pulled the trigger... I said my last words.

"I love you see you in Heaven."

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Morgan says:
29 Aug, 2010 10:47 PM

that made me cry :'( im sorry for your loss. i'd be crying really hard if that were me :'(

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scar says:
01 Sep, 2010 06:59 AM

i like it but i dont like the last words "see u in heaven"how could he be in heaven when he commited suicide?!..duh.

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love says:
01 Sep, 2010 12:54 PM

Oh my gosh this is so sad. I'm going to cry. But this is so sweet, killing yourself to be with your true love.

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Hazel Diane says:
04 Sep, 2010 12:18 AM

Uhmmm...the story is quite familiar...but "see u in heaven?"
Uhmmm...those people who committed suicide can't stay in heaven...Oh...Yah...It's just a story..but I don't think it's a true story...PEACE...

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