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When the heart goes wrong

Broken

18 Dec, 2011 06:34 AM

There was a boy who just entered college. He was the not so popular guy with almost no friends. Until he fell in love with the most popular girl in the college... Every boy was after that girl... She hadn't even ever noticed him but he was always there trying to start a conversation... Eventually when time passed the boy became popular and became friends with the girl. Soon they were best friends, the girl always shared her sorrow with him and they were always on their phone talking. The boy thought that the girl also fell in love with him so one day he decided to tell her his feelings. He sent the girl a message asking her to come meet him in the park... The girl came and they started to talk

Boy: Hi!
Girl: Hi! What happened? Why did you call me?
Boy: I have something important to tell you...
Girl: Go on..
Boy: Well since I first saw you I fell in love with you! I love you more than anything, you are my everything, I love you so much that I would take a bullet for you, I...
The girl interrupted him,
Girl: Errrrmm.. Everything you said is very touching.. But sorry I do not feel the same for you.. I'm sorry..
A tear drop fell from the boy's eyes. And there was a moment of silence....
Boy: Okay I understand... Can we stay best friends though?
Girl: You know how I am.. I won't be able to consider you the same anymore.. I've gotta go, bye.. It would be better if you could forget me and please don't even call me, I won't reply..

Saying this the girl left the park and the boy was there alone in his grief.... For the next four days the boy did not go to college... And when he came back he was silent.. Not even joking around as he used to.... Everyone asked him what was the matter but he said all kind of lies....

A few weeks went by and by coincidence the boy met the girl in a music shop.. The girl did not look at the boy but the boy was constantly peeking over to see a glimpse of the girl...
Suddenly an armed man entered the music shop and asked that everyone handed in their phone and everyone did as he asked apart from the girl, she though that her phone was on silent and that she could just call the cops when the robber was not looking but she was wrong...... Everything was going fine just before her phone rang... The robber became mad and aimed at the girl...

Just before he could fire, the boy came in between the robber and the girl and a second before he got shot she said to the girl;"I told you I would take a bullet for you" and the bullet pierced his heart... The boy died on the spot......

Tags: Love, Unloved, Courage
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Sarah says:
14 Aug, 2012 08:41 PM

Nice&Touching...

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Keixhvine says:
15 Aug, 2012 05:21 AM

sO sAd..

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Molly says:
17 Aug, 2012 04:36 AM

My heart just broke

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sally mahe says:
21 Aug, 2012 11:12 PM

O.M.G that is so touching ..and girls you so dumb...what did you ever do for him..

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EpicAngy says:
22 Aug, 2012 10:33 PM

Girls these days are such retards(-.-)
And no offense because I'm a girl.but if this boy did so much to fall in love,at least he reached out
For you,it's kinda rare these days to find a guy that would take a bullet for his valentine AHHH
BULLET FOR MY VALENTINE BEST BAND EVERRR <33

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Nandita rawat says:
24 Aug, 2012 08:44 AM

Itz really toching story

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Anweshdas says:
26 Aug, 2012 07:56 AM

In my life there are lot of sad stories and i commited suicide but being unlunky iam alive and i want to know how people come out from the ocean of sorrow so i read this story and it was jst superb.

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jacqueline surdilla says:
27 Aug, 2012 05:40 AM

a very very toching story very nice.....................

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Aaisha mohammad says:
27 Aug, 2012 01:34 PM

sometimes we should think what we do its not good to hurt someones feelings
if someone confessed that he love u dont say hurting feelings
this is a realy love story

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James linus says:
28 Aug, 2012 07:45 PM

I lil lyk it..

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hitesh says:
29 Aug, 2012 03:17 AM

i don't knw y grls can't understand a true love.
When a some wrongs wth his then she understand yyyyyyyyyyyy???

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kristel karen rarbago rivera says:
29 Aug, 2012 07:25 AM


my gosh!!!!!!!

he sacrificed ,,,.... even his life.. the girl he loved... ...........


how touching!!!!!!!

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shane says:
30 Aug, 2012 05:56 AM

WOW...its was so touching ...

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Kaye Dianne Laña says:
30 Aug, 2012 09:23 AM

this is so sad !!!1

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onele says:
30 Aug, 2012 05:08 PM

owwww ma world ncoooo xem dis iz really sad,,,whr to find sum1 lyk dat boy/???

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lebanna says:
31 Aug, 2012 03:52 AM

that was very sad......
This story serve as a lesson that we have to appreciate those who love us...

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anne says:
31 Aug, 2012 10:01 AM

wow hoe touching..

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Abhishek says:
31 Aug, 2012 08:59 PM

A boy can do anything for the girl he love... But the girl ever realise what she had lost at that movement.....

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raven says:
01 Sep, 2012 04:41 AM

,,nice one..

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Ash says:
01 Sep, 2012 11:02 AM

Thats heart touching story

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pain says:
07 Sep, 2012 06:20 AM

So the boy died... did the girl regret?????

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Preeti says:
07 Sep, 2012 06:15 PM

This is not importnt that u love only the person whom u lliked nd u want to stay with him no... U have to love the person who loves u vrymuch... Nd want to stay with u forever.... This is actual love...

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victoria says:
28 Oct, 2012 02:48 AM

that's so sad ..

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dove says:
14 Nov, 2012 05:16 PM

BEAUTIFUL STORY! HEART TOUCHING

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avishan says:
03 Dec, 2012 12:46 AM

fake. no robber comes in to ask for everybodys phone. And if she was calling the police it would not be ringing. it would only have rung if the police were calling her. which obviously didnt happen.

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Samantha S. says:
30 May, 2013 10:19 PM

That boy is sooooooooooooooooooooooooooo dumb. Why take a bullet for a woman that doesn't give a crap about you??? So stupid:P

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karina sanchez says:
18 Jun, 2013 01:07 AM

awwww this is soo sad I feel like crying

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Chris says:
17 Jul, 2014 08:54 AM

That poor girl has to live with that...my heart is in shambles.

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LONER says:
07 Oct, 2014 06:21 AM

I guess you can't blame the girl, she's just being honest and besides it would be wrong if she will accept the love of the guy even though she doesn't have any feelings towards him.

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Madeline says:
11 Nov, 2014 12:30 AM

Omygod, this is so sweet! I love this story! <3 I actually teared up! It's amazing. Keep writing! ~Madeline <3

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yvonne sharifa says:
17 Nov, 2014 01:18 PM

soooooooooooooooo sad!

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Lia veronica says:
08 Jun, 2015 03:15 AM

At least the girl shwld hav been frnds wid him selfish girl and so sad story

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Purple says:
28 Aug, 2015 05:54 PM

I honestly hate it when the person that is so valued just rejects the other person, and becomes the reason of their death... Its just really sad...

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The Unknown says:
15 Sep, 2015 09:07 PM

That is so sad

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tear drops says:
16 Feb, 2016 11:19 PM

Omfg when I saw the last bit I cried my eyes out like literally, its so sad, and its funny how the most popular girls are always the mean ones (-.-)

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adamski says:
26 Mar, 2016 04:26 PM

so sad

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Vivian says:
22 Dec, 2016 04:24 AM

Very touching....so sad

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J-lo says:
14 Aug, 2017 11:04 PM

It was touching but I could've called it. Cliche

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