painful cries
steph carter
25 Sep, 2011 03:14 PMpainful cries darkened skies a sea of tears coming from all the years a hidden face filled with disgrace fear for her life she heads for a knife wonders what to do she stabs the knife right through blood runs down she wishes to be found she clings to her life will she win this fight? will they be to late? this was always her fate a painful death lets have some meth to celebrate the life i have to fight
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Post a Comment01 Feb, 2012 04:40 PM
I think this is a very amazing poem. I'm only 13 but I love to write and read poetry. I'm in love with this one.
04 Jun, 2012 07:12 AM
dont end your life to early.....
no one can hurt you badly...
but only your self..
make your life a little more lively..
soo that you can be happy..
take a deep breath and say to your self..
i can do this...i can make my life better than this...
happy ,sad,angry,love, are emotions
you should use the rest of your life ..
making mistakes are the fun parts..
of our messed up world......
soo be creative ...
this will make you life more colorful...
>>>>danica_13<<<<<
24 Jun, 2013 07:25 AM
I love THE poem. It makes me cry, not OF pain but cry OF joy. An amazing talent is bound to be more interesting poems. Keep it up!