Save me!?

Ridhi Ridhi

22 Dec, 2017 11:39 AM
There is so much pain in my heart ,
 So much that it is breaking me apart..
This infliction springs up day by day , 
That all my desires are unable to allay ..
As time flies , i try to live , 
To be the old me , happy revive..
But all I'm is lost in the ocean , 
Where all my profound emotions created a commotion ..

Putting hard efforts competing with the pace , 
But my heart siezes n loses its trace ..
Being so upset , depressed and pensive , 
Chained in memories, entirely captive..
Now I'm ragged, exhausted and drained , 
Not bleeding but still bloodstained..
Wanna be happy , not reel but real , 
Drain all my tears with utmost zeal ...
Let my heart out and move on quietly,
Wanna get rid of this cage , desperately ..
Be the same , old and happy soul , 
Away from love with no loopholes!
Tags: Love, Heartbroken
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Trista D Simmons says:
23 Jan, 2018 08:57 AM

I could have wrote this poem. It is exactly how I have been feeling since about December of 2017.
I actually ended a relationship because of the feelings and am now in the process of rebuilding me

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Syed sana says:
05 Feb, 2018 07:49 AM

I found it de best frm ol. Lyk all my feelings r hidden in it

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jayde smith says:
14 Feb, 2018 07:22 PM

I like it. It tells so much more than any depressing moive.

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zeey says:
21 Jul, 2018 09:35 AM

inspiring

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