Razor

Emily

06 Sep, 2010 12:12 PM
Razor to the wrist 
Blood on the floor 
Razor to the bone 
I can't feel it 
The pain is decreasing 
The blood is increasing 
Now my blood flows freely 
Freely from the cut 
Cuts on my wrist 
My time is running out 
Razor to the wrist 
One last time 
Now I am dying
Tags: Emo, Razor, Cut
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BROOKE says:
28 Oct, 2010 05:16 PM

umm the part it say "i cant feel it " it would sound better if u said "i cant feel it anymore"

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caseyy says:
20 Aug, 2011 09:34 PM

that was beautiful

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Sarah xx says:
03 Jan, 2012 03:13 PM

Bought tears to my eyes, love it

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Maddie says:
09 Jul, 2012 09:31 PM

amazing!

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Sarah says:
18 Jul, 2012 10:24 PM

Beautiful; but WHY?!!!?

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danielle says:
06 Sep, 2012 06:26 PM

sad

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erica says:
31 Jan, 2014 03:01 AM

U touch my heart I feel u girl

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Katherine says:
05 Apr, 2014 10:46 AM

Omg, this is beautiful!

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breezyPoohVanity says:
14 Apr, 2014 01:54 PM

it was really good

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yasmine says:
19 Apr, 2014 06:44 AM

brought tears to my eyes cause i was doing this at the same time i was reading it

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